BERTA'S PORTFOLIO

PREPARATION: Paragraph 1: - When did it happen? In Ireland - Where were you? In the attracion park - Who were you with? With another family Paragraph 2: We climbed up in a roller coaster and then the roller coaster stopped just in the big rise. Paragraph 3: - What happened? We steyed 10 minuts stopped . How did you feel? I feel very nervous WRITING  Last summer, I went  to Ireland with another family. It was the third day and we were going to an attraction park when we saw a big ride. It was incredibly! Is a massive new roller coaster that will be the second biggest in Europe. We climbed up in a roller coaster but there were a lot of people, so we had to wait. Although we had to wait, we wanted to go up there because it seemed very funny. When it was the time to climb up, the roller coaster stopped just in the middle and we stayed there for 10 minutes. These 10 minutes I felt very nervous.

It's nearly September and I've decided to make some resolutions because I want to improve some things in my life before we start school again. Who says you have to wait until New Year? I promise to be more active in the house. When my parents tell me to help around the house, I won't make an excuse. The next time they asks me to do something, I'll do it. I'm good at horseball, but the coach says I've need more practise. So I promise to train harder and every day. I need improve my balance but is good. by the time the next season starts, I'll be stronger and faster- I'll be playing for the team in every match!