PREPARATION:
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- When did it happen? In Ireland
- Where were you? In the attracion park
- Who were you with? With another family
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We climbed up in a roller coaster and then the roller coaster stopped just in the big rise.
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- What happened? We steyed 10 minuts stopped
. How did you feel? I feel very nervous
WRITING
Last summer, I went to Ireland with another family. It was the third day and we were going to an attraction park when we saw a big ride. It was incredibly! Is a massive new roller coaster that will be the second biggest in Europe.
We climbed up in a roller coaster but there were a lot of people, so we had to wait. Although we had to wait, we wanted to go up there because it seemed very funny.
When it was the time to climb up, the roller coaster stopped just in the middle and we stayed there for 10 minutes. These 10 minutes I felt very nervous.
Paragraph 1:
- When did it happen? In Ireland
- Where were you? In the attracion park
- Who were you with? With another family
Paragraph 2:
We climbed up in a roller coaster and then the roller coaster stopped just in the big rise.
Paragraph 3:
- What happened? We steyed 10 minuts stopped
. How did you feel? I feel very nervous
WRITING
Last summer, I went to Ireland with another family. It was the third day and we were going to an attraction park when we saw a big ride. It was incredibly! Is a massive new roller coaster that will be the second biggest in Europe.
We climbed up in a roller coaster but there were a lot of people, so we had to wait. Although we had to wait, we wanted to go up there because it seemed very funny.
When it was the time to climb up, the roller coaster stopped just in the middle and we stayed there for 10 minutes. These 10 minutes I felt very nervous.
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